There's a lot of depth to the percussion that really shines through in this entry. Even at the beginning, I like how there's this metal clinking sort of sound that could also pass as being melodic while still adding to the percussive soundscape. Although this feels more like a piece where the drums are stronger, I do think the instruments evoke that wistful emotion you're going for and that combined with these techno drums work to effectively convey the finer details of the art.
I quite enjoyed the way in which the piece flows through its sections, but I found its conclusion to be rather unsatisfying. I think it was because the return of the A section, while presented differently, still had this sense of forward momentum that gave me this expectation it was going to a different section melodically and it feels like there could have been more time given to lead into other breakdown sections - perhaps even venturing away from the underlying chord progression. For me, personally, even though the removal of the percussion suggested an ending, I wasn't feeling it composition-wise.
That being said, I love how this entry caters to both the naturistic details in the art but still has an overall techno kind of vibe to it. The main sort of idea in the A section has this immersive, underwater atmosphere while still fitting in with the idea of cogs turning and machine work at play. You managed to capture the details and the overall picture - I would have loved to hear more.